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tulips for mom -
the faraway look
in her eyes

Chinese Translation (Traditional)

給媽媽的鬱金香 --
她凝視遠方
的眼神

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

给妈妈的郁金香 --
她凝视远方
的眼神

http://neverendingstoryhaikutanka.blogspot.com/ 

About haiku

“ I believe that haiku poem can be written well without season words, written well in free form and not only in 5-7-5 syllables . Sayumi Kamakura too points out that sincerity of emotion is more important than using season words: Season words are still merely words. As long as they are words, then the emotions the author attempts to convey with them should take precedence over the words themselves. The Japanese haiku that has touched me are those where the author's true sentiments burst from the words. What is most important in haiku is how much true feeling is included in the poem".

“ Cred că poemul haiku poate fi scris bine, fără referire la anotimp și fără forma fixă 5/7/5 silabe.

Sayumi Kamakura accentuează deasemeni că emoția autentică este mai importantă, decât “kigo”.

Ele sunt, totuși, doar cuvinte. Atăta timp căt cuvintele sunt ceea ce sunt, emoțiile pe care autorul intenționeaza să le exprime trebuie să se evidențieze dincolo de ele.

Haikul japonez care mă impresionează este acela care emană sentimente arzătoare.

Cel mai important în haiku este sinceritatea emoției.”

               Ban'ya Natsuishi

QUARTERLY GINYU HAIKU GALLERY 80

1

brocken marriage -

looking to the mowing grass

I feel sapless 

x

despărțire -

privesc iarba cosită

fără vlagă

2

globalisation -

with every sigh I turn into

dandelion fluff

x

globalizare -

de câte ori respir

mă fac păpădii

3

power chain -

swarm of wild bees pulls me

out of the porch

x

energie în lanț -

roi de albine sălbatice

mă scot din pridvor

Comment:

"These haiku of unhappiness are attractive."

                      Ban'ya Natsuishi

Failed haiku A Journal of English Senryu Volume 3, Issue 35

http://haikuhut.com/FailedHaikuIssue35.pdf

Cirrus, tankas de nos jours n o 10 ~ octobre 201 8

                

  

le son de la pluie

n'était jamais

si harmonieux –

le charme d’un moment

sous ton parapluie percé

                                         

niciodată,

sunetul ploii n-a fost

atât de armonic –

sub umbrela ta cu găuri

farmecul unui prilej

never

has the key of rain

been so harmonious -

a moment's charm 

under your pierced umbrella

http://www.cirrustanka.com/issues/10_Cirrus_automne_2018.pdf