QUARTERLY GINYU HAIKU GALLERY 80

1

brocken marriage -

looking to the mowing grass

I feel sapless 

x

despărțire -

privesc iarba cosită

fără vlagă

2

globalisation -

with every sigh I turn into

dandelion fluff

x

globalizare -

de câte ori respir

mă fac păpădii

3

power chain -

swarm of wild bees pulls me

out of the porch

x

energie în lanț -

roi de albine sălbatice

mă scot din pridvor

Comment:

"These haiku of unhappiness are attractive."

                      Ban'ya Natsuishi

Failed haiku A Journal of English Senryu Volume 3, Issue 35

http://haikuhut.com/FailedHaikuIssue35.pdf

Cirrus, tankas de nos jours n o 10 ~ octobre 201 8

                

  

le son de la pluie

n'était jamais

si harmonieux –

le charme d’un moment

sous ton parapluie percé

                                         

niciodată,

sunetul ploii n-a fost

atât de armonic –

sub umbrela ta cu găuri

farmecul unui prilej

never

has the key of rain

been so harmonious -

a moment's charm 

under your pierced umbrella

http://www.cirrustanka.com/issues/10_Cirrus_automne_2018.pdf