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duminică, 2 aprilie 2017

Never Ending Story - Butterfly Dream, by Chen-ou Liu


English Original
black clouds rumble --
our cotton candies stick
to one another


Third Prize, Wild Plum Haiku contest 2016

Lavana Kray


Chinese Translation (Traditional)
黑雲隆隆聲 --
我們的棉花糖
粘在一起



Chinese Translation (Simplified)
黑云隆隆声 --
我们的棉花糖
粘在一起


http://neverendingstoryhaikutanka.blogspot.ro/2017/04/butterfly-dream-cotton-candies-haiku-by.html#comment-form

vineri, 1 aprilie 2016

WILD PLUM HAIKU CONTEST 2016



bubuit de nori -
vatele noastre de zahăr
se lipesc între ele





"As my Third Place Choice, a haiku with striking color contrast via black clouds and pink cotton candies (at least that’s the color I perceive), although nowadays I believe cotton candy can be just about any color. Having said this, another reason for choosing this one is because of its 3 “l” sounds in line one, carried over to its double “c” sounds in line two, which lets it roll off the tongue nicely. I also can easily visualize the cotton candies sticking to one another, and looking like puffy clouds."

an’ya, principal editor of UHTS cattails