NeverEnding Story - One Man's Maple Moon: Loneliness Tanka

English Original
loneliness
staring at me ...
your letter
already one year old
still unopened

Chinese Translation (Traditional)
孤單
瞪著我 ...
已經一年了
你的信
仍然還沒打開來看
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
孤单
瞪着我...
已经一年了
你的信
仍然还没打开来看
" The juxtaposition of the personified loneliness and a one-year-old unopened letter is emotionally effective and the use of "staring" adds psychological depth to this "middle-of-the-story" tanka." 
                                      Chen-ou Liu
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